Showing posts with label unclentioned emotion. Show all posts
Showing posts with label unclentioned emotion. Show all posts

Thursday, July 12, 2018

Catching Up: Finalist in Poetry Contest, New Book with Images, And Reviews


Finalist in Poetry Contest


Greetings!  It’s been awhile since I did a blog post.  Funny, since the last blog post I did I got a lot of hits.  I just needed a break I guess.  So, let’s get too it.  First, I wanted to brag that I was a finalist in the June 2018 poetry contest on Goodreads Poetry! Group, with my poem “Talking Walls.” I didn’t win, or get many votes, but a couple people posted they liked it, and I’m glad that my poetry was able to reach somebody.  To see it along with the other 6 finalists (out of over 200, Wow) you can go to https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/19356279-please-vote-for-the-june-2018-poetry-contest  If you don’t want to click on anything here it is for you:


Talking Walls


We are painted on the walls.
A stale empty white expounds character,
like full chaotic colors.
Memories encased in drywall.
Bleeding out to eyes searching the
multitudes of expression.

The memory of a friend passed on,
hangs a dragon by the door.
A blue Angel flies above the television
pondering the traveling friend who painted her.
The deer by the church are uncertain
of their wintering creator,
wondering if it is a dead relative.
The flutist gazing at the caged Nightingale remembers
the living family that gifted her.

A photograph of a daughter much younger
stares at passerby’s with her name in ceramics
next to the TV.
She has spoken to the walls in handprints
intentionally placed, and accidently.

A mother experiments with her creative process,
hanging pieces of her soul for various eyes seeing…
Strangers, Lovers, Her Own.
Her walls are an exhibition of her life,
they speak of her pronouncements in confidence.

What do other walls among other dwelling speak?
Curious minds must stare and extract.
Minds meld personalities.
Walls for examiners to notice insights of soul and life.




Using My Own Poetry Exercise


On a somewhat related note, I haven’t entered any poetry contests since then and I haven’t really written any more poetry.  I am proud, that this poem was written in one of the exercises I wrote about previously in this blog: looking at your surroundings and writing about them.  This is written about the things I have on my living room walls.  I didn’t really do any edits to this.  I have started editing and rewriting my other poetry though.  I discovered this cool thing in Word, where you can go into the review section and click “Read Aloud Speech” and it will read your work back to you.  No fancy editing programs needed! 

Public Domain Images and Poetry Reviews


I’d like to say that breaks are good for the soul!  I didn’t take a complete break, I did find a lot of poetry I have written and started making a new book about the cycle of the year and seasons.  I’m not sure if I’m going to self-publish it or not, but I was kind of hoping I could find a publisher who could do all the marketing work for me.  I’m just not good at doing that kind of thing.  My published poetry book “Un-Clenched Emotion” doesn’t have any pictures except for the cover, and I regret that, so I’m going to try to add pictures to my new one.  I was always afraid that if I used something from the internet, people would consider it stealing.  Well, I found out that there’s this thing called “Public Domain Images” where you can use the pictures in anyway you want for sale or for fun.  There are a couple of websites you can go to, to find these kind of images.  I’ve started doing this with my blog to make it look better too.  I also did reviews of 5 poetry chapbooks so far, and got my book reviewed too.  Only one person was able to post the review on Amazon so far, but I do have 3 four-star reviews on Goodreads at  https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/32320363-un-clenched-emotion.  I hope you have learned something from this post, or just found a little enjoyment from it.  Until next time! 

Tuesday, May 23, 2017

The Title of Un-Clenched Emotion or Unclenched Emotion

When I wrote my poetry book I thought of the perfect title: "Unclenched Emotion."  Something funny happened when I went into Word.  It said unclenched was a misspelled word.  Because of this I thought unclenched wasn't a word, much to my dismay.  So I changed it to un-clenched emotion.  I wasn't giving up on my title even though I thought the word didn't exist.  It's a sad thing I changed it with the dash, because that makes it harder to find.

To my humiliation, when I posted on boards on Create Space, where I published my book, that unclenched wasn't a word, I faced some correction.  It is a word.  I had to have other authors telling me so.  That's really embarrassing for someone who studied English, but we all have our faults.  What does unclenched mean?  In the most basic sense it means to open from a clenched position.  Like unclenching your teeth.  Or it can mean to relax.  It just goes to show you that you should not rely on spell check.  It's not just Word that has unclenched as misspelled, it's doing it here on blogspot too.  (Funny note, blogspot is also underlined in red).  I have all kinds of red underling a word that has a definition and is spelled correctly.  Confusing!

So why did I choose "Un-Clenched Emotion" for my title?  I wanted something that described emotion uninhibited.  I wanted to describe hidden emotions opening up.  I wanted to describe emotion as a positive state, and relaxed is that.  My poetry is full of emotion and I was (and will be in the future) writing about my feeling.  Sometimes writing about feelings that I'm guessing others feel.  I think in great writer should put their feelings into their words, unabashed.  They should be "open" about it instead of "clenched"  I was in my book so  ultimately, I think I have a great title.  I just wish I published without the dash!